Writing Process essay_Lê Thị Thu Hiền

Name: Le Thi Thu Hien

Class: 11e12

                                                         WRITING ESSAY

                   TOPIC: THE PROCESS OF BUYING A REAL PRODUCT ONLINE

The world is changing: the death of store based retailing, as we know
it, to be replaced by shopping on the Internet because of the speed and
ease of use for the customers . Shoppers can visit web stores from the
comfort of their homes and shop as they sit in front of the computer.
However, there are a multiple brand of products for a the same item.
This can lead to the confusing for the buyers and so four below steps
seem to be a guide that helps them buying intelligently and the web
www.hotdeal.vn is an example for easily understanding.

First of all, the buyers should search the Internet on many websites to
have a general view about product. After knowing thing to buy, to begin
with the clicks to surf, the customers increase more about price, quality,
color , etc… the cost that is going to be spent on the product and also
many other factors are quite similar. This involves a lot of research
and the search can be done easily. For constant, in hotdeal.vn , they
have to click the city they want and choose the type of product such
as entertainment, spa, beauty and education, etc…After knowing the
features of that product there, they should search it on other websites
such as muachung.vn or raovat.com to have larger vision about product.
This process is done to compare the various features of the product with
other

Second, after having the overall knowledge about product, the
customers should compare the features of products together. This stage
is very important because it affects to the selection. If they are planning
to buy a particular product, then they have to make a comparison in all
aspects to check that is the best value for the money. The buyers can
account on themselves or use the sites help them to compare. These
sites have a chart to show the comparison the products based on

different features. It is easier for them to choose the best.

Thirdly, in this step, the customers have to make a decision on the final
product they love to purchase. From the above analyst , the customers
can see the advantages and disadvantages of each. Next, they have
an eye on their financial situation and make a conclusion if they should
buy a particular brand or famous brand or something like that. Then
they have to ensure all information about product, ship method and
payment . In the case of hotdeal.vn, when you are satisfied with the
deal, click “buy” to start purchasing.

Finally, the important step is payment for the product in the process
of buying online. There are various methods of online payment.
The common modes of payments use their own account on website
securely . The sellers have a merchant account where credit card
processing is available. If anyone hasn’t already had one, it is
compulsory to sign up. The account consists of many information such
as their name, email, number of credit, ect… The customers log in the
website and order the product they want. That their payment is before
or after receiving the product is based on the policy of each company.
With hotdeal.vn, when the buyers have an account, choose one of the
payment methods: by bank account or by home delivery. Then click “
pay” and wait for a call from the employee of company. Receiving the
product and accept to pay if they like it or vise versa.

To sum up, it is clear that e-commerce is a quick developing area in
the rapid moving information technology world. Searching ,comparing
and deciding the suitable product to buy, then paying for it through safe
methods are the main steps to purchase a product online that website
www.hotdeal.vn is an realistic example . Let do them and you will have
the convenience and saving time for a modern lifestyle.

VERSION 2 

      The world is changing: the death of store based retailing, as we know it, to be replaced by shopping on the Internet. Shoppers can visit web stores from the comfort of their homes. However, there are a multiple brand of products for a the same item. This can lead to the confusing for the buyers and so four below steps seem to be a guide that helps them buying intelligently and the web www.hotdeal.vn  is an example for easily understanding.

     The first step is to check the product you want on the website to have a general view about product. In hotdeal.vn , the customer have to click the city they want such as Ha Noi, Da Nang or Ho Chi Minh and choose the type of product namely entertainment, spa, beauty and education, etc… With a category, select a specific product or service. To begin with the clicks to surf, the buyers increase more information of  that product as price with discount percent , quality, color, place  etc. They can read the seller’s feedback in the bottom of page to view their comments before buying.

     The second step is to make an order  if the customers decide to buy it. After they have an eye on their financial situation and make a conclusion the best value for the money or something like that. Then they have to ensure all information about product, ship method and  payment . In the case of hotdeal.vn, when you are satisfied with the deal, click “buy” to start purchasing.

       The third step is to register a hotdeal account. If  anyone hasn’t already had one, it is compulsory to sign up. To register, click the “register” button at the top left corner on the hotdeal homepage. The account consists of many information such as buyer’s  name, email, number of credit, address, telephone number,   etc…They will be gave ID and password of the account for the safety. Just fill all blanks to become a hotdeal member. It takes some minutes to complete  this stage.

           Finally, the important step is to pay for the product in the process of buying online. The customers log in the website and order the product they want. There are various methods of online payment in hotdeal.vn .They have to choose one of the payment methods: by bank account or by home delivery. Then, click “ pay” button  and finish the buying online process. The rest task is to wait for a call from the employee of company and receive the product and accept to pay if they like it or vise versa. They can put their comments for the satisfaction or complaint on Hotdeal.vn if they want. 

         To sum up, it is clear that e-commerce is a quick developing area in the rapid moving information technology world. Checking product, making an order  and registering  then paying for it through safe methods are the main steps to purchase a  product online that website www.hotdeal.vn is an realistic example . Let do them and you will have the convenience and saving time for a modern lifestyle.