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How to book train ticket via Saigon Railway Website
How to book train ticket via Saigon Railway Website
Recently, people
have trend to travel by train because it is cheaper and more safety than
travelling by other vehicle. However, it is difficult for customers in going to
station to buy train tickets directly. To deal with this problem, Saigon
railway has brought out booking train tickets online. Customers will own a
ticket in short time when doing the following steps.
First of all,
customers must access Saigon Railway website ‘vetau.com.vn’. The website
appear, people see a blue function bar, including items ‘đặt chỗ, tra cứu, hướng
dẫn, đăng nhập, đăng ký’. Then customers let to select the function which they
want. For example, if they want to book tickets selectively, they choose the
function ‘Đặt chỗ tự chọn’. Immediately, an information form is given, next to
the second step.
To the second step, they have to consider
whether they buy single ticket or around ticket, then fill in all gaps. After having
finished them, customers click on button ‘Tra cứu’. If they can not enter into
this part, it means that they do not have their account. They have to put on ‘Đăng
ký’ to sign up to company’s account by filling in all gaps and sending it. The company
will sent a letter to them. To be accepted, customers must check in inbox and
click the link they copied here. Thereby, people have on their own account. Next
to, people access their account and move on the following step.
The third step is
to make their choice after they compare among seats carefully. They ought to
complete register form again, and print it. In the end, they have a train
ticket without spending a lot of time as well as their effort to go to station.
In conclusion, it
is useful for customers to book train tickets online through three steps.
Saigon Railway passenger transport company should not only remain but also
improve this service so that customers are really satisfied with their choice.
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How to book train ticket via Saigon Railway Website
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How to book train ticket via Saigon Railway Website
Recently, people have
trend to travel by train because it is cheaper and more safety than travelling
by other vehicle. However, it is difficult for customers in going to station to
buy train tickets directly. To deal with this problem, Saigon railway has brought
out booking train tickets online. Customers will own a ticket in short time
when doing the following steps.
First of all, customers
must access Saigon Railway website ‘vetau.com. If it is the first they have
used this website, they must create a new account. This step is very important
because if not do that, they cannot book the ticket. The website page contains
a blue function bar at the top, including items ‘đặt chỗ, tra cứu, hướng dẫn,
đăng nhập, đăng ký’. Please put on “đăng ký” button to register. After filling
in gaps in registration form and send it, they sign in their email and click on
the link sent to by Saigon railway to activate the account. If their account
hasn’t been activated, they can put “đăng nhập” button and select “Gửi mã kích hoạt”
item; their account will run immediately.
The second main step
is to reserve train tickets. They can click on ‘Tra cứu’ button
to choose suitable date if they want to know more about timetable of train. After
that, they are back the period page to place an order. To move cursor to ‘đặt
chỗ’ button and select what function they want such as to order seat
selectively, to order seat automatically or to search list of reservation. Next,
they will see a form here, considering to choose single ticket or around ticket
as well as filling in information in all gaps. Put on ‘Tra cứu’ button and wait
a moment, the system will give them results of information on train. They take
seat which they want to shopping basket and check information by clicking on
small square in right-hand row of table.
Afterward, customers should update their
information, including object customers, place where they receive tickets and
method of payment. It is necessary for them to follow this step because the
station will depend on that to accurate discount for them. For example, if
customers are students, selecting “student” item on object customer; the system
will offer a 10% discount on their ticket and will announce how much they pay
for it on their registration form. They can pay train fare at every transaction
location or ATM from VietinBank.
Finally, they don’t
forget to double check their reservation to make sure that nothing is wrong and
print it. In the end, they have a train ticket without spending a lot of time
as well as their effort to go to station.
In conclusion, it is useful for customers to book
train tickets online through four steps because it helps them save time and
solve some individual problem when buying tickets directly. Thereby, Saigon
Railway passenger transport company should not only remain but also improve
this service so that customers are really satisfied with their choice.
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ReplyDeleteDear Hong,
ReplyDeleteAfter reading your writing, I can see that you essay is quite good in general . besides giving good background information to readers when purchasing a train ticket on Saigon Railway website, your essay is well organized with apparent steps. An other strong point is the transition between paragraphs is quite smooth. However, in the body of your writing, you still didn’t mention the importance of 3 steps that customers follow. And about the using vocabulary as well as grammar structures here, personally, I think it need to be improved a little bit. Specifically, in the second step, instead of saying customers ‘have to consider’, or ‘ought to complete’ as they are a somehow imperative, you should choose an other word or alternative structure to make your sentence more persuasive. Moreover, in the conclusion, you enhanced the paragraph interestingly but you still should focus on the process, for example, you talk about the benefits it bring to customers when they follow these step (save their time, money on transportation..)
I hope that my opinion helpful for you in the second draft. in all, you've done a good job!
best,
hoangtrang
after reading your essay, i have some comments below:
ReplyDeletefirstly, the introduction contains the necessary elements : background information, thesis. moreover,you has used many effective methods of organization. the essay is well-organanized . look at the essay, the audience knows how many steps to buy products at Saigon Railway website. however, i think the conclusion should have more details in order to get attraction.
i hope that it is useful for you.
commented by Bui Thi Loan