Class: E12
Today, people all over the world can buy almost anything without
leaving their homes. Lazada.vn is a website which will help you do this easier. You just need
to follow these simple steps and then you will get what you want in a
short time.
It begins with Accessing the Vietnamese Lazada website “Lazada.vn” and using the search bar of the website, or browse through the menu to find the desired product.
After selecting the product, hover your mouse over a product and click "Buy Now", your Shopping Cart will show up to make the payment. If you want to see details about the product, click on the product detail page. In the "Product Details" page,
click the "Buy Now"
to go to shopping cart.
Next, On the "Shopping Cart", you enter the discount code (if available), press "Use" to check . If the discount code is valid, you will see the message
"Discount code has been added successfully". Click "Proceed pay" to go to the payment page, or click "Continue Shopping" if you want to buy more products and repeat the same step.
Login is the 4th step.You just have to enter your login
information by your account and click "Continue". In case you are a new customer, please select the button "Proceed" in the area named "I am a new customer."
Last of all is making payment . On the order confirmation page, you enter your address information in the right column, select the payment method in the middle column. The total amount that you pay is on the right column. Click "Order" to confirm the purchase. After ordering, you will be taken to the order confirmation screen, and will get an email sent to your email address when registered so as to confirm that order. Your
task is just wait for getting the items you have bought.
It can be seen that making purchase online is not
difficult as we thought. It will be a big trend in the near future because of
the convenience and time saving.
VERSION 2
Today, people all over the world can buy almost anything without leaving their houses. Lazada.vn is a website which will help you do this easier. You just need to follow these simple steps and then you will get what you want in a short time.
It begins with Accessing the Vietnamese Lazada website “Lazada.vn” and using the search bar of the website, or browse through the menu to find the desired product.
After selecting the product, hover your mouse over a product and click "Buy Now", your Shopping Cart will show up to make the payment. If you want to see details about the product, click on the product detail page. In the "Product Details" page, click the "Buy Now" to go to shopping cart.
Next, On the "Shopping Cart", you enter the discount code (if available), press "Use" to check . If the discount code is valid, you will see the message "Discount code has been added successfully". Click "Proceed pay" to go to the payment page, or click "Continue Shopping" if you want to buy more products and repeat the same step.
Login is the 4th step. You just have to enter your login information by your account and click "Continue". In case you are a new customer, please select the button "Proceed" in the area named "I am a new customer" to creat a new account. This just spends several seconds.
Last of all is making payment . On the order confirmation page, you enter your address information in the right column then select the payment method in the middle column. The total amount that you pay is on the right column. Click "Order" to confirm the purchase. After ordering, you will be taken to the order confirmation screen, and will get an email sent to your email address when registered so as to confirm that order. You just have to wait for getting the items you have bought at home.
It can be seen that making purchase online is not difficult as we thought, especially Lazada.vn. Because of the convenience and time saving, buying online will be a big trend in the near future soon.
Hi Bao, after reading your process essay, I have some comments for you.
ReplyDeleteFirst, your paragraph is well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction contains four necessary elements: background information, thesis and plan of development. However, I think your introduction will be better if it is eye-catching.
Second, as I mentioned in the first comment, your essay have a good organization. The instruction is clear and coherent. You use a variety of transition words to make the instruction easier to follow such as: after, next, the fourth step, last of all, etc. The body indicates the way to buy product online in Lazada.vn one by one. Each paragraph is one step. Moreover, your explanation of each step is sufficient and easy to catch the idea. But, in my opinion, you should explain the importance of each step in the beginning of each paragraph.
About the conclusion, it restates the thesis and wrap up the essay. Nevertheless, you should make it clearer when you restate the thesis such as adding the name of the website which you mentioned in your essay.
One more thing, I think in this sentence: “Your task is just wait for getting the items you have bought.” The grammar is wrong.
In general, you did a good essay. I hope that some of my comments above is really useful for you to enhance your writing skill. :)
Hi Bao,
ReplyDeleteI have some comment for your essay as follow:
- The intruduction is very good, it contains includes necessary elements: background information, thesis and plan of development.
- The body is quite clear, it has a good instruction.
I think your conclusion is good.I like your process essay.
comment by lan.