Sunday, March 24, 2013

Process essay_Nguyễn Thị Nguyệt

Version 1:
HOW TO MAKE A BOOKING VIA VIETJETAIR WEBSITE
Vietjetair is a new airline brand, therefore, these instructions will be useful for you when you make a booking via website for the first time.
To begin the process, you need to get access to Vietjetair homepage at Vietjetair.com. If you see “Vietjetair” in white on the red font and  variety of  horizonal function  bars like “News, Flight Information, Services, Booking information, Login, About us, Where to buy?”, you really manage to do it.
Next, choose your suitable flight time and class. It is when you look at the lower part of the page at the right side, you can find the box used to make the booking. After choosing some basic information like  the origin, destination, flight date, etc  and clicking at “Search flights”, the flight shedule including departure, return and price  appear. Choose “Continue”  at the bottom of the page when you finish flight information above.
The third stage is to enter your own primary reservation information. You should take a note that boxes having “*” mark beside is compulsorily completed. Then, click “Continue” button to move on the next step.
As soon as your flight requirement and personal information are sent, it’s time to require other services such as baggage or seat assignment if you like . There are a range of baggage weights you can choose. If this does not make sense to you, just choose “No, thanks” in the box of Baggage. In addition, you are able to choose your seat by click directly on the map of the flight and this will charge you with different fees. After all, click “Continue”.
Making payment is your later phase. Options for you is paying through payment tools like Visa or Master card.  If you choose “Pay it later” and the system will display note for payment in which paymnet port. One thing here you need to pay attention to is the extra fee of 33,000 VND per every transaction. After that, click “OK” and “Continue” respectively.
Finally, in order to make sure that your booking is successful, you had better check your booking information consisting of  departure and return time, kinds of service fees, contact information, flight time, code. All of this booking information will be saved on system for 24 hours, hence, you are supposed to make payment or it will be cancelled.
Hope that you will have your booking siplified with these instructions.
Source: http://www.vietjetair.com/Sites/Web/en-US/Home

Version 2:

HOW TO MAKE A BOOKING VIA VIETJETAIR WEBSITE

With the demand to travel for business purposes, visiting family, and tourism constantly increasing,
Vietjetair is the first private airline founded in Vietnam to be licensed to operate domestic and international flights.  Its motto is to enable domestic passengers and foreign tourists to travel at low cost.  And  becauseVietjetair is a new airline brand, you might get troubles when trying to make a booking, especially via their website. Therefore, these instructions will be useful for you  for the first time you do it.
To begin the process, you need to get access to Vietjetair homepage at Vietjetair.com. If you see “Vietjetair” in white on the red font and  variety of  horizontal function  bars like “News, Flight Information, Services, Booking information, Login, About us, Where to buy?”, you really manage to do it.
Next, choose your suitable flight time and class. It is when you look at the lower part of the page at the right side, you can find the box used to make the booking. After choosing some basic information like  the origin, destination, flight date, etc  and clicking at “Search flights”, the flight shedule including departure, return and price  appears. Choose “Continue”  at the bottom of the page when you finish all the  flight information above.
The third stage is to enter your own primary reservation information. You should take a note that boxes having “*” mark beside is compulsorily completed. Then, click “Continue” button to move on the next step.
As soon as your flight requirement and personal information are sent, it’s time to require other services such as baggage or seat assignment if you like . There are a range of baggage weights you can choose. If this does not make sense to you, just choose “No, thanks” in the box of Baggage. In addition, you are able to choose your seat by click directly on the map of the flight and this will charge you with different fees. After all, click “Continue”.
Making payment is your later phase. Options for you is paying through payment tools like Visa or Master card.  If you choose “Pay it later” and the system will display note for payment in which paymnet port. One thing here you need to pay attention to is the extra fee of 33,000 VND per every transaction. After that, click “OK” and “Continue” respectively.
Finally, in order to make sure that your booking is successful, you had better check your booking information consisting of  departure and return time, kinds of service fees, contact information, flight time, code. All of this booking information will be saved on system for 24 hours, hence, you are supposed to make payment or it will be cancelled.

Through six simple steps listed above, I hope that you will have your booking siplified and have a chance to not only experience low cost policy but also friendly and enthusiastic flight attendants, high safety, and convenience of services.
Source: http://www.vietjetair.com/Sites/Web/en-US/Home



  

3 comments:

  1. Hi Nguyet,
    After reading your process essay, I have some comments for you:
    Overall, you have done a good job. The instructions are easy to follow because of the brief sentences. I think everyone who has read your essay can book Vietjetair's ticket without any problem. However, the are some points that I want you to consider:
    - In my opinion, the introduction will be much better if you provide some background information about Vietjetair, to give readers a clearer idea.
    - There are some small grammar/spelling mistakes in your essay:
    + Vietjetair is a new airline brand(;)therefore, these instructions...
    + horizonal => horizontal
    + the flight shedule including departure, return and price appear => appears/will appear
    + when you finish (THE) flight information above
    - Moreover, I think you should have some kind of restatement in your conclusion.
    In general, you have written a really good and easy-to-follow process essay. Thank you for reading this and hope that it can help you somehow in improving your writing skill :)

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  3. i think trang's comment has covered mostly your grammar mistakes. however, the word "siplified " in the last sentence, do you mean "simplified"?
    overall, you did a good job. i can't find any other mistakes so far.
    keep your good work!

    commented by vân

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