Sunday, March 24, 2013

Process Essay - Hoang Thu Thao

Version1:
        Spending time going shopping is always a wonderful experience for everyone. However, in daily life, people normally don't have much spare time for this. That is why more and more online shops in the Internet have been introduced to all the customers with just a click for the entrance, and after that they can purchase any products they want. Among many online shopping websites, shopoline24h.com is one of the best chosen website of Vietnam customers for buying clothes online. Of course it will become easier for you to buy things on this website if you follow the three following steps.

        When entering shopoline24h.com, you will see the introduction of this website with four sections named "Hàng order Nam", "Hàng order Nữ", "Hàng order Baby shop" and "Hàng có sẵn". That's the type of products which are offered to customers by shopoline24h.com. Firstly, the process of shopping online begins with register in the top right of the site. If you already had an account, you can click the “đăng nhập” button. Otherwise, you had bettter create a new one by clicking on the “tạo tài khoản mới" to register. During this step, it will not take too long for you to provide some personal information such as email address, password, name, date of birth, etc. After that, click the “hoàn tất” button to complete your registration.


       Secondly, it's necessary to find the item that you want to purchase. As you can see on the left of the site, all the models are divided into different categories such as skirts, shirts, trousers, shoes, accessories, etc.. which are very easy to take a look. Moreover, by just one click into each type, you can see the full pictures of all products as well as detailed information about their descriptions, sizes, codes, colors and prices. Besides, search engine is also available as another way for you to look for your item easily if you type the products' name there. After that, put the product you want to buy into shopping cart by clicking "Thêm vào giỏ hàng" button and move to the final step.


     In this subsequent step, you are asked to provide some exact features about the product which you have just chosen, included size, color and quality correctly, to place an order. When you finish, just click "Mua ngay" button and it will lead you to the payment method that you are about to use. It's so convenient for online buyers because there are many ways to pay for their product. For example: cash, credit card or bank transfer. Just fill your information into the table and click  "gửi đơn hàng" button, then you almost finish. Finally, make sure that your order is placed successfully by checking your email, because shoponline24h.com will check your order and send email to inform you about it. Thus, all you have to do now is waiting for your product to be arrived at your home.  


       In conclusion, many customers send us the feedback that their purchases are processed smoothly when they followed three steps above. Therefore, shopping online on shoponline24h.com has become a popular and trustful address for everyone.

       

Version2:
         Spending time going shopping is always a wonderful experience for everyone, especially women who are never fed up with dressing up and updating new trend. However, in daily life, people normally don't have much spare time for this. That is the reason why more and more online shops in the Internet have been introduced to all the customers with just a click for the entrance, and after that they can purchase any products they want. Among many online shopping websites, shopoline24h.com is one of the best chosen website of Vietnam customers for buying clothes online. Of course it will become easier for you to buy things on this website if you follow the three following steps.

        When entering www.shopoline24h.com, you will see the introduction of this website with four sections named "Hàng order Nam/Men's clothing", "Hàng order Nữ/Female's clothing", "Hàng order Baby shop/Baby shop order" and "Hàng có sẵn/Now available", which the site specilizes in. That's the type of products which are offered to customers by shopoline24h.com. Firstly, the process of shopping online begins with register in the top right of the site. If you already had an account, you can click the “Đăng nhập/Log in” button. Otherwise, you had better create a new one by clicking on the “Tạo tài khoản mới/Register" to register. During this step, it will not take too long for you to provide some personal information such as email address, password, name, date of birth, etc. After that, click the “Hoàn tất/Finish” button to complete your registration.

       Secondly, take a chance to find the item you want to purchase. As you can see on the left of the site, all the models are divided into different categories such as skirts, shirts, trousers, shoes, accessories, etc.. which are very easy to take a look. Moreover, by just one click into each type, you can see the full pictures of all products as well as detailed information about their descriptions, sizes, codes, colors and prices. Besides, search engine is also available as another way for you to look for your item easily if you type the products' name there. After considering carefully and making your own decision, put the product you want to buy into shopping cart by clicking "Thêm vào giỏ hàng/Add into cart" button and move to the final step.

     In this subsequent step, you are asked to provide some exact features about the product which you have just chosen, included size, color and quality correctly, to place an order if it is not out of stock. When you finish, just click "Mua ngay/Buy now" button and it will lead you to the payment method that you are about to use. It's so convenient for online buyers because there are many ways to pay for their product. For example: cash, credit card or bank transfer. Just fill your information into the table and click  "Gửi đơn hàng/Place your order" button, then you almost finish. Finally, make sure that your order is placed successfully by checking your email, because shoponline24h.com will check your order and send email to inform you about it. Thus, all you have to do now is waiting for your product to be arrived at your home.  

       In conclusion, many customers send us the feedback that their purchases are processed smoothly when they followed three steps above, which are completing your registration, choosing your product and place your order. We understand your time is valuable, so rather than going to many stores, just simply enter our website which provide you the best quality and service. Therefore, shopping online on shoponline24h.com has become a popular and trustful address for everyone.
        

4 comments:

  1. Dear Thao,
    Your process essay is excellent because of the detailed information and logical order. I only want to say that your essay will be more perfect if you recall the names of three steps in the conclusion to make more clearer and esier to catch the infomation.
    Best wishes,
    Huong

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  4. Hi Mrs.TuTu, it’s great to read your essay and I want to tell you that I have successfully purchase a product after following your instruction.
    Firstly, your introduction contains enough information for reader to get into it and also mentions how many steps people may follow. In your essay, you have using a lot of complex – compound sentences and your punctuation between paragraphs is really good.
    Secondly, in your essay I have been wondering that if a foreigner reads your written process, may they be confused of some Vietnamese words. I suggest that you add English words beside Vietnamese words. For example: “hoàn tất” -> hoàn tất/successful.
    In addition, I expect a more interesting conclusion in your rewrite version.
    Love,
    Mr.Tutu.

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