Entry
2 _Bùi Thị Loan
Item
1 : “C2 green tea” Advertisement
Components
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Contents
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Source
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Tiger
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Target
audience
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Every
viewer ( especially in winter)
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3
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Medium
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Poster
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4
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Context
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unknown
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5
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objectives
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Effective
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6
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message
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General
selling proposition
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Slogan
: “keep your drink hot for hours.”
If
you are going to a journey in winter. May be, bringing about tiger’s product is the best
choice for you
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Product attributes
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Keep your drink hot for hours.
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Customers
benefits
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Keep
temperature for body in winter
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Personal values
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Warm
feelings, excitement.
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7
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Message
execution
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Description
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The poster is described that a man wear a coat and on the neck has a
scarf and bring a bag on the shoulder.A man is standing a remote highlands. May be
, he is going on his journey to go anywhere. The weather is the winter. Thus, he stops to drink a cup of
hot water.
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Execution
style (s)
Rhetorical
device (s)
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Mood
image
A scarf wear on the neck ( the winter)
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8
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Evaluation
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Interesting,
great idea. Look at the poster, viewers want to buy the product if you must go
a trip far away.
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Item
2 : Guinness’s beer advertisement
Component
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Contents
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Source
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Guinness
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Target
audience
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All men
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3
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Medium
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Broadcast on TV
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4
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Context
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unknown
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5
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objectives
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Effective
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6
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message
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General
selling proposition
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Slogan
: “Guinness’s Beer is always drinks for all men from past to now”
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Product attributes
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Cooling during
the summer, good taste.
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Customers
benefits
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It
is a favorite drink for men
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Personal values
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Affirm positive or real men in society.
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7
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Message
execution
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Description
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Only with 50 second, the advertiser of
Guinness famous brand has represented
entire Darwin’s theory of evolution. In a bar, three men are together
drinking Guinness’s beer. While they are drinking, the Darwin’s theory of revolution
is likely to a film showing in their mind. Their body has changed during the
history from now to ancient until they has drink a cup of beer.
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Execution
style (s)
Rhetorical
device (s)
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Mood
image.
Humorous,
overstatement
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8
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Evaluation
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Interesting,
great idea. Look at the advertisement, viewers want to try it on now. .
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Item
3 : biti’s advertisement
Component
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Contents
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Source
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Biti’s
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Target
audience
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Every viewer
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3
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Medium
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Broadcast on TV
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4
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Context
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The campaign of Biti’s in 2002
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5
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objectives
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Effective
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6
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message
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General
selling proposition
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Slogan
: “Biti’s – Cherish Vietnamese foot.”
Biti’s is the best choice for everyone in
order to care of the foot.
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Product attributes
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Protect your feet in all the journey.
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Customers
benefits
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Bring
about smooth for feet
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Personal values
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Excitement, comfortable.
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7
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Message
execution
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Description
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The advertiser has represented the struggle
during Vietnam peoples. To begin
with Long Quan’s steps passing down the ocean and Au Co’s steps passing up to the mountain. Then, Tay Son’s steps
making the legend of speed. Next, steps passed over Truong Son range. At the
end, steps into the new millennium.
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Execution
style (s)
Rhetorical
device (s)
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Musical,
fantasy,
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8
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Evaluation
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Interesting,
great idea. Look at the advertisement, viewer want to buy them.
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hi Loan. There are my some comments for your entry. Overall, they are quite good because of varieties in kinds of products,and advertising methods.However, i think you should notice some bellow points:
ReplyDelete1. 1st item:notice that 'the poster describes that .'.not "The poster is described". 'Look at the poster, viewers want to buy the product if you must go a trip far away'. it's your feeling, not viewers.
2.2nd item: the customer benefit is not "It is a favorite drink for men" , you shouldn't say that. it 's not the benefit the Guinness beer brings
3. 3rd item:it seems to be better than the previous. there are some same mistakes like those. You should notice the grammar
that's all my comment. hope you better next time
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ReplyDeleteDear Loan,
ReplyDeleteOverall, your entry is quite good but it has some mistakes and I’d like to give you some advice:
Firstly, the objective of two first items isn’t effective but affective.
Secondly, in the 1st one, personal values are not correct. It is something such as: freedom, excitement, happiness…and I think you should consider about this again.
In the third one, product attributes need to show clearer.
commented by Vu Thi Gam
Dear Loan,
ReplyDeleteHere are some comments for you:
- Item 1: I don’t find the relation between “C2 green tea” advertisement and Tiger, do you mean that Tiger is the name of the green tea? It should be clearer. I can’t see its slogan as you said, I will be very happy if you show me where it is on the poster.
- Item 2: The context has two circumstances ( modern life and primitive) you should write the description more detailedly so that audience can understand all things when reading it. The execution style is also musical.
- Item 3: I think you should talk more about its product attributes, for example, strong, durable, safe or something like that.
Hope you better!
Love,
Hương