Monday, March 11, 2013


Entry 2 _Bùi  Thị Loan

Item 1 :  “C2 green tea”  Advertisement                                                                            


                            

Components
Contents
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Source
Tiger
2
Target audience
 Every  viewer ( especially in winter)
3
Medium
 Poster 
4
Context
  unknown
5
objectives
 Effective
6
message
General selling proposition
Slogan : “keep your drink hot for hours.”
If you are going to a journey in winter. May be,  bringing about tiger’s product is the best choice for you
Product  attributes
 Keep your drink hot for hours.
Customers benefits
Keep temperature for body in winter
 Personal values
Warm feelings, excitement.
7
Message execution
Description
 The poster is described  that a man wear a coat and on the neck has a scarf and  bring a bag on the shoulder.A  man is standing a remote highlands. May be , he is going on his journey to go anywhere. The weather is  the winter. Thus, he stops to drink a cup of hot water.
Execution style (s)
Rhetorical device (s)
Mood image
 A scarf wear on the neck ( the winter)
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Evaluation
Interesting, great idea. Look at the poster, viewers want to buy the product if you must go a trip far away.


Item 2 : Guinness’s beer advertisement



Component
Contents
1
Source
Guinness
2
Target audience
 All men
3
Medium
 Broadcast on TV
4
Context
  unknown
5
objectives
 Effective
6
message
General selling proposition
Slogan : “Guinness’s Beer is always drinks for all men  from past to now”

Product  attributes
Cooling  during  the summer, good taste.
Customers benefits
It is a favorite drink for men
 Personal values
 Affirm positive or real men in society.
7
Message execution
Description
 Only with 50 second, the advertiser of Guinness famous brand has represented  entire Darwin’s theory of evolution. In a bar, three men are together drinking Guinness’s beer. While they are drinking, the Darwin’s theory of revolution is likely to a film showing in their mind. Their body has changed during the history from now to ancient until they has drink a cup of beer.
Execution style (s)
Rhetorical device (s)
Mood image.
Humorous, overstatement

8
Evaluation
Interesting, great idea. Look at the advertisement, viewers want to try it on now. .


Item 3 : biti’s advertisement


Component
Contents
1
Source
Biti’s
2
Target audience
 Every viewer
3
Medium
 Broadcast on TV
4
Context
 The campaign of Biti’s in 2002
5
objectives
 Effective
6
message
General selling proposition
Slogan : “Biti’s – Cherish  Vietnamese  foot.”
 Biti’s is the best choice for everyone in order to care of the foot.

Product  attributes
Protect  your feet in all the journey.
Customers benefits
Bring about  smooth for feet
 Personal values
 Excitement, comfortable.
7
Message execution
Description
 The advertiser has represented the struggle during Vietnam peoples. To begin  with  Long Quan’s steps passing  down the ocean and Au Co’s steps passing  up to the mountain. Then, Tay Son’s steps making the legend of speed. Next, steps passed over Truong Son range. At the end, steps  into the new millennium.
Execution style (s)
Rhetorical device (s)
Musical, fantasy,

8
Evaluation
Interesting, great idea. Look at the advertisement, viewer want to buy them.

4 comments:

  1. hi Loan. There are my some comments for your entry. Overall, they are quite good because of varieties in kinds of products,and advertising methods.However, i think you should notice some bellow points:
    1. 1st item:notice that 'the poster describes that .'.not "The poster is described". 'Look at the poster, viewers want to buy the product if you must go a trip far away'. it's your feeling, not viewers.
    2.2nd item: the customer benefit is not "It is a favorite drink for men" , you shouldn't say that. it 's not the benefit the Guinness beer brings
    3. 3rd item:it seems to be better than the previous. there are some same mistakes like those. You should notice the grammar

    that's all my comment. hope you better next time

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  3. Dear Loan,
    Overall, your entry is quite good but it has some mistakes and I’d like to give you some advice:
    Firstly, the objective of two first items isn’t effective but affective.
    Secondly, in the 1st one, personal values are not correct. It is something such as: freedom, excitement, happiness…and I think you should consider about this again.
    In the third one, product attributes need to show clearer.
    commented by Vu Thi Gam

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  4. Dear Loan,
    Here are some comments for you:
    - Item 1: I don’t find the relation between “C2 green tea” advertisement and Tiger, do you mean that Tiger is the name of the green tea? It should be clearer. I can’t see its slogan as you said, I will be very happy if you show me where it is on the poster.
    - Item 2: The context has two circumstances ( modern life and primitive) you should write the description more detailedly so that audience can understand all things when reading it. The execution style is also musical.
    - Item 3: I think you should talk more about its product attributes, for example, strong, durable, safe or something like that.
    Hope you better!
    Love,
    Hương

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