Wednesday, March 20, 2013


LE THI NGOC ANH_Process Essay

VERSION 01
       Nowadays, online shopping is becoming popular trend for shopaholic on the Internet. Among no end of websites that shoppers can purchase just about anything from companies providing their products online, Amazon.com is known as a great big shopping site that hosts zillions and zillions of products being available to mankind. So, just try on shopping on this website follows 10 steps to get the best products with the best reasonable prices.
      First of all, open your web browser. Make sure that you access to a computer with Internet connection.
      Then, go to Amazon’s web site by typing ‘’http://www.amazon.com’’ into your browser’s address bar.
     The third step is finding your product. At this point, you can search by barcode number, ISBN number, or even item title. Look for the best deal. There are often multiples of the same item at varying prices, both used and new. Also, you don’t be afraid to buy used. If the item looks to be in good enough condition for you, you can save a great deal of money sometimes.
      Next, open up your main product page you want
    Afterwards,  sign into your Amazon account to start purchasing. If you have not had it yet, creat an account on your own right now
      Sixth clicks the ‘’Add to cart’’ button that is located to the right hand side of the page. If you would like to change the quantity of the item, you may find the drop-down box above this button. Click the drop-down and select your quantity , before clicking the button.
      Seventh clicks the’’Proceed to check out’’ if all the items in your cart are updated to the right quantity. If not, you just click the’’Edit your cart’’ button.
      Later,  sign into your Amazon account once again if prompted
      Nineth ensures that all information is correct. This includes the billing address, shipping address, payment accounts, credited amounts, etc. If not, you may click ‘’Change’’ button that is located underneath each section. Besides, if you would like to remove an item from your shopping cart, just click the’’Change’’ button to this item’s quantity. Type ‘’O’’ into the quantity before you click the ‘’Continue’’ button to save this change.
      Last of all, click the’’Place your order’’ button that is found in the right hand side of the page
     To sum up, only by the short steps above can you purchase yourself easily and safely on Amazon without wasting lots of time along with some clicks.
VERSION 02

Nowadays, shopping online is becoming a popular trend for shopaholics on the Internet. Among no end of websites that shoppers can purchase just about anything from companies providing their products online, Amazon.com is known as a great big shopping site that hosts zillions and zillions of products being available to mankind. So, just try on shopping on this website follows below steps to get the best products with the best reasonable prices.
First and foremost begins with finding your product after accessing to the website address by typing ‘’http://www.amazon.com’’ into your browser’s address bar. At this point, you can search by barcode number, ISBN number, or even item title. Look for the best deal. There are often multiples of the same item at varying prices, both used and new. Also, you don’t be afraid to buy used. If the item looks to be in good enough condition for you, you can save a great deal of money sometimes.
Like other websites, to buy any product on  ‘’amazon.com’’, you need to have an account. If any, open up your main product page you want and sign into your Amazon account to start purchasing. If not, move the cursor to ‘’Hello. Sign in your account’’ next to the ‘’Search box’’ and click on blue words ‘’Start here’’ then create an account as usual.
Afterwards, select the ‘’Add to cart’’ button that is located to the right hand side of the page. If you would like to change the quantity of the item, you may find the drop-down box above this button. Click the drop-down and choose your quantity, before clicking the button. If all the items in your cart are updated to the right quantity, click ’’Proceed to check out’’. If not, you just click the ’’Edit your cart’’ button. Later,  sign into your Amazon account once again if prompted
Next, ensure that all information is correct. This includes the billing address, shipping address, payment accounts, credited amounts, etc. If not, you may click ‘’Change’’ button that is located underneath each section. Besides, if you would like to remove an item from your shopping cart, just click the ’’Change’’ button to this item’s quantity. Type ‘’O’’ into the quantity before you click the ‘’Continue’’ button to save this change.
Last of all, click the ’’Place your order’’ button that is found in the right hand side of the page
To sum up, only by the short steps and some clicks can you purchase yourself easily and safely on ‘’amazon.com’’  without wasting lots of time and energy going out. I dare say you will be pleased with every service of Amazon. Thus, just try on shopping on it to become the smartest shopper!





2 comments:

  1. hi Ngoc Anh,
    after reading detail your essay, i have some cmt for you
    The introduction is very good and i like it because it contains the necessary elements( background info,thesis...
    About body of essay, although 10 steps you give are easy to follow, it is long a litle bit. I think, it is better if process contains 4 stages. First is to access on website and find products what you need. second step i to sign into your Amazon account to start purchasing. Next, checks information: billing address, shipping address, payment accounts, credited account... Finally place your order.
    In addition, paragraphs shouldn't just have 1 or 2 sentences. In your essay, you use many listing signals such as first, second, third... and sentence connectors : afterwards, also, besides..
    keep working!
    commented by Pham Thi Nga

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  2. Dear Ngoc Anh,
    After reading through your essay, i have some comments for you:
    First of all, the introduction will be perfect if there are no some minor grammar mistakes. It's good when you introduce the topic in indirect way. It really attracts the readers. However, there is one minus point because of grammar mistakes as i said above. For example, i think you should write " shopping online" instead of "online shopping". And there is an article "a" before "popular trend", i think.
    Secondly, about the body of the essay, i have to say that it is such a detailed and easy guide for people who have never visited Amazone page before. However, in my oppinion, the first step is not really necessary because it's the basic skill that anyone who wants to shop online may know.By cutting this step, your essay will be consise for sure.
    Lastly, i think you can make the conlusion more informative and interesting by writing more instead of using only 1 sentence to sump up the whole thing.
    Anyway, you did a good job! Keep trying and practicing!
    Thanks you for reading. Hope these comments will be useful for you.

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