Sunday, March 10, 2013

Entry 2_Hoang Thi Hong Phuong


  Item  1: “Nolan’s chedder” advertisement




                 Components
                                         Contents
1
Source
Nolan’s Chedder
2
Target Audience
Every viewer
3
Medium
Broadcast TV
4
Context
Unclear
5
Objectives
To introduce product; persuade people to buy and to eat Nolan's cheddar
6
Messages
General Selling Proposition
If you eat Nolan's Cheddar Cheese then you will be incredibly strong. And get yourself out of death by using the muscle you just gained from eating Nolan's Cheddar Cheese.
Product Attributes
Good taste
Nutritious
Customer benefits
Reinforce strength
Energetic
Personal values
Health
Fitness
Pleasure
7

Message execution
Description
Basically this video is a mouse coming out of its mouse hole to encounter a rat trap with the Nolan's Cheddar Cheese on it. So the mouse starts to eat the cheese, and after being about halfway done with the cheese, the rat climbs on top of the rat trap like it is on top of the world and the rat trap snaps. Then the video pans and it seems like the rat is going to die but all of a sudden the   mouse starts to bench press the rat trap bar then the screen fades away and it says   Nolan's Cheddar Cheese “seriously strong”.
Execution style
Rhetorical device
Fantasy
Musical
Humorous
Overstatement
8
Evaluation
Good expression


II.                Item 2 : Adidas shoes Advertisement





Components
Contents
1
Source
Adidas
2
Target Audience
Athletes
3
Medium (media)
Printed advertising
4
Context
Modern life
5
Objectives
To introduce and persuade people to use Adidas shoes
6
Messages
General Selling Proposition
If you wear Adidas shoes, you can turn extremely fast
Product attributes
Dedicated, high quality
Customer benefits
Enhanced athletic ability and feel comfortable
Personal values
Personal accomplishment
7
Message Execution
Description
In a modern stadium, an athlete wearing Adidas shoes  is running. There are many fuzzy legs to show his speed as fast as he has 600 million legs ( the sentence on the ground). The slogan of Adidas is "Impossible is nothing" emphasizes the quality and the benefits it brings to customers.
Execution style(s)/ Rhetorical Device(s)
Image
Overstatement
8
Evaluation
Impressing. It makes Adidas become familiar to people


III.              Item 3: Sony Vaio Advertisement







Components
Contents
1
Source                               
Sony Vaio
2
Target Audience
Everyone who have the need to use computer
3
Medium
Printed advertising
4
Context
Unknown
5
Objectives
persuade users that Vaio is good and very light, so it is a good choice.
6
Messages
General selling proposition
Lightweight and quality are the best features
Product attributes
Portable, especially light, smooth screen.
Customer benefits
Mobile-lifting, easily- taking.
Personal values
Pleasure
Wisdom
Comfortable
Enjoyable.
7
Message execution
Description
An elegant businessman is on the runway of an airport. There is a bag in his hand and some papers left in another one. He looks amazed because most of the documentary papers and even the laptop are gone with the gust of the wind made by airplane nearby.
Execution style(s)
Rhetorical device(s)
Mood or Image
Overstatement (Vaio is light as a paper)
8
Evaluation
Interesting. The advertisement can describe the lightness of laptop.



4 comments:

  1. hi phuong,
    i have some cmts on ur entry as follow:
    2nd item: i think the target customer is not only athletes but also everyone in need of using shoes
    About the customer benefits, in my opinion, it should be " speed and comfort"
    3rd item, in the dimension of personal values, you should make it consistent! and i think you can combine "comfortable with "enjoyable" and correct the form into enjoyment
    tks for reading!

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  2. hi phuong,
    i like your adverts that is interesting.
    1st and 2rd item is very good! 1st item: in the point,when we eat Nolan's Cheddar Cheese we will be incredibly strong.
    2rd item: Adidas shoes is high quality it help us comfort in the activitives, such as item it help he running is fast.target customer is everyone
    3rd item: in this item, i think evaluation is effective and interesting.
    that is all my comment
    comment by lan

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  3. dear phương,
    after reading your entry 2, i have some comments for you:

    1. the first item is my favourite as it is a funny advertisement and it covered mostly everything. However, i'm wondering if "fitness" is a personal value of this cheese brand's users. from my perspective, it should be "health" and "pleasure" only.

    2. in my opinion, the target customers can be "sport-shoes users", not only the atheletes.

    3. the last item is very interesting and easy to understand. nevertheless, about personal values, i think "enjoyable" and "pleasure" are just the same (you should use only one) . Moreover, i suppose that "self-fulfillment" can also be a personal value (vaio laptop brings about professional look for its users)

    overall, you did a good job on this entry. keep doing your work!

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  4. Dear phuong,
    After reading your entry, I have some comment for you as follow.
    -- Item 1: I am very impressed by this funny video. It is not only funny but also strange.
    Congratulation!
    --Item 2 and Item 3: they are quite good. However, I still have some small advice want to share with you.
    - Item 2: It will be better if you can add other target customers who can use the shoes for their need.
    -Item 3: you should know how to use the words wisely. It can make your advertisement becomes persuasive.
    Thanks for reading.

    ( commented by: Nguyen Thi Hong Quynh)

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