Entry
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Item
1: Poem
Sonnet 116: Let me not to the marriage of
true minds
By: William Shakespeare
Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O no, it is an ever-fixèd mark
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wand'ring bark,
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come;
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.
Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O no, it is an ever-fixèd mark
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wand'ring bark,
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come;
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.
Rhetorical
devices:
·
Rhyme:
ü Perfect
rhyme: minds – finds, mark – bark, shaken – taken, cheeks – weeks, be – me,
never – ever.
ü Imperfect
rhyme: doom – proved.
·
Repetition: love (Love is not love, love’s
not time’s fool, love alters not with his brief hours and weeks), alter (Which
alters when it alteration finds), remove (Or bends with the remover to remove).
·
Alliteration: his height, compass come, but bears, nor no.
·
Assonance: ‘Admit impediments’
·
Metaphor: love is ‘an ever-fixèd mark’ and love
is ‘the star’ ⇨ emphasize the constancy of
true love.
·
Symbol: rosy lips and cheeks (a girl).
Message:
True
love is constant and everlasting in spite of the corrosive power of time, changes
and difficulties.
Item
2: Fable
The
Dog and the Shadow
A DOG, crossing a bridge over a stream with a piece of
flesh in his mouth, saw his own shadow in the water, and took it for that of
another Dog, with a piece of meat double his own in size. He immediately let go
his own, and fiercely attacked the other Dog to get his larger piece from him.
He thus lost both: that which he grasped at in the water, because it was a
shadow; and his own, because the stream swept it away.
Rhetorical
devices:
·
Metaphor:
ü The
Dog (person who is greedy in real life)
ü Flesh
(things that the person has)
ü The Shadow
(person’s cupidity)
Message: Be
satisfied with what we have. Greed can often make us lose everything we have in
hand.
Item 3: Cartoon
Rhetorical
devices:
·
Metaphor:
ü The
skinny boy (the poor)
ü The
obese man (the government)
·
Rhetorical question: ‘Where is poor?’
·
Irony: The contrast between the skinny boy
and the obese man. The obese man has such a very fat stomach that he cannot see
the poor kneeling down nearly in front of him.
Message:
The
poor people are on the verge of starvation and they beg for help; however, the government
neglects them.
Sources:
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ReplyDeleteI have some comments below about your items:
1. I really like the poem you chose for item 1. And the way you analyzed it is very detailed and easy to understand.
2. Item 2 is a short story. I'm a little bit lazy so I really like short story like that. Although it's short but it's still so meaning full. I mostly agree with you about the rhetorical devices; however, I have don't really concur with your message.Actually, if the message just had the second sentence, I would like it more. I myself find the message is that: Don't be TOO greedy, especially when it belongs to others (or "If you covet all, you may lose all.")
3. The 3rd item is also meaningful. I just think that there is one more irony here. That is: The obese man is using binoculars to look for the poor but he can't see the poor boy under his fat stomach.
let me make it clearer. I mean the irony is between the binoculars and the fact that the obese man doesn't see POOR. And besdies, the poor is just very near him but he keeps looking for them in long distances.
That all my opinions about you entry.
I have to say one more time that it's interesting and I relly like it.
Thank you for posting this!