Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Entry 1 Nguyen Thi Mo



Item 1 : Cartoon



Metonymy: Boat- enconomy of a country
                    icebeg: Challenges that economies facing
                   
Message: while many European  country became the victims of economic crisis, America didn’t realise the problem they have and this economy would collapse soon.  

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         http://danieljmitchell.wordpress.com/tag/news-appearance/

 
Item 2 : poem
Sonnet 75 by William Shakespeare
       So are you to my thoughts as food to life,
Or as sweet season’d showers are to the ground;
And for the peace of you I hold such strife
As ’twixt a miser and his wealth is found;
Now proud as an enjoyer, and anon
Doubting the filching age will steal his treasure;
Now counting best to be with you alone,
Then bettered that the world may see my pleasure;
Sometime all full with feasting on your sight
And by and by clean starved for a look;
Possessing or pursuing no delight,
Save what is had or must from you be took.
Thus do I pine and surfeit day by day,  
Or gluttoning on all, or all away. 

Rhetorical devices:

·         Rhyme: life- Strife, Ground – found , anon- alone, treasure- pleasure.....
·         Simile:  you to my thoughts – food to life, sweet seasoned showrs are to the ground......the peace of you – twixt a miser and his wealth is found...........
·         Metaphor : sweet season – spring
Message: The poet expresses his complete pleasure in the presence of his beloved, but says that his devotion resembles that of a miser to his money, filled with anxiety combined with pleasure in his wealth.
Source: 
 http://www.william-shakespeare.info/william-shakespeare-sonnet-75.htm



Item 3 Song
Firework

Do you ever feel like a plastic bag
Drifting through the wind, wanting to start again?
 Do you ever feel, feel so paper thin
Like a house of cards, one blow from caving in?
Do you ever feel already buried deep?
Six feet under screams, but no one seems to hear a thing
Do you know that there's still a chance for you '
Cause there's a spark in you?
Chorus
(You just gotta ignite the light and let it shine
Just own the night like the 4th of July
'Cause baby, you're a firework
 Come on, show 'em what you're worth
Make 'em go, oh, oh, oh
As you shoot across the sky
Baby, you're a firework
Come on, let your colors burst
Make 'em go, oh, oh, oh
You're gonna leave 'em falling down )

You don't have to feel like a waste of space
You're original, cannot be replaced
If you only knew what the future holds
After a hurricane comes a rainbow
Maybe you're reason why all the doors are closed
So you could open one that leads you to the perfect road
Like a lightning bolt, your heart will blow
And when it's time, you'll know
Chorus
( ......)
Boom, boom, boom
 Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon It's always been inside of you, you, you And now it's time to let it through

Boom, boom, boom Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon Boom, boom, boom Even brighter than the moon, moon, moon
Rhetorical devices:
  • Simile : you- plastic bag/ paper thin/ house of cards
  • Rhyme: thin – in, rainbow – blow- know
·         Anaphora: do you ever feel
·         Metaphor : you – firework,
·         Irony :  hurricane ( difficulty), rainbow (success/ good thing).......
Message: we should not be afraid to express who you really are in the inside, and not letting your flaws stop you from having a great life
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5 comments:

  1. hi Mo,
    your entry is quite good, you collect update information, a ramantic poem and a good song. Especally, i like the first item as it express not only economics problem but aso serious irony, your message is good
    However, i have some suggestions:
    +in the first item:the rhetorical device is metaphor not metonymy, the other device there is overstatement

    +in the third one: you shoud add the rhetorical question as rhetorical device
    these are my total comment, hope that it is useful for your entry.
    commented by: Vu Thi Gam

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  2. Hi Mo,
    After reading your 3 items, I want to give some comments for your.
    - item 1: in my opinion, boat and iceberg is used like a metaphor, not metonymy because both are compares two different things by speaking of one in terms of the other, but about metonymy that is closely connected with it (ex: the White House for the US present)
    - item 2: I think you should list all images of each rhetorical device, not just use symbol "....". I want add more detail for you:
    smile: "proud as an enjoyer
    - item 3: you miss repetition "Do you ever feel", "Even brighter than the moon"
    rhetorical question : "Drifting through the wind, wanting to start again?", "Like a house of cards, one blow from caving in?" , "Do you ever feel already buried deep?
    parallelism :in the first of fifth sentences, the writer use the structure "Do you ever fell + st" then a rhetorical question
    I hope that some my comments will help you improve your entry
    composed by Hoang Thi Bich Hong

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  3. dear Mo,
    After reading your entry, i have some comments as followed:
    - item 1: i think that the rhetorical devices here is metaphor: the sunk boat - the countries which had been collapsed by the economic depression, the moving boat - American economy, the big iceberg - the huge problem that threatened the economy of America ( it maybe the fiscal cliff). and the message here is: American economy kept moving forward while other countries in Europe had been sunk in the big recession. if they couldn't solve their problem, they would be collapsed soon.
    - item 2: first, it would be better if you had listed all the rhyme here. other rhetorical devices are chiamus ( So are you, Thus do I) and repetition (as, or, now).
    - item 3: there is still one device in the song which is repetition in "do you ever". i agree with your message.
    in all, you've done a good job! congrat!
    commented by: hoang thi trang

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  4. dear Mo,
    after reading your first entry, i feel like it, especially is the last item.and here are my some comments on the entry.
    at the first item, the picture is impressive, it somehow refers to our specialties. however, i think the icebeg here is not completely the challenges, it is so general. it can be the real crisis on the world.
    at the last item, i love this song too and have no idea with your message.
    hope you will be better in the next entry.
    commented by: Nguyen Thi Thoan

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