VU THI GAM- ENTRY 1
ITEM 1: CARTOON
-Rhetorical devices:
+Symbol: a mickey implies as a person
+Metaphor: in America , the use of a gun is so popular that a small animal
also know how to use this kind of weapons
-Message: nowadays,
everyone uses gun on public, it cause many bad consequences, it can help
someone to protect themselves but also kill people all time. Therefore, it
shoud be banned in the soceity
ITEM 2: POEM
Isn't It Funny?
It's funny how hello is always accompanied with
goodbye
It's funny how good memories can start to make you cry
It's funny how forever never seems to really last
It's funny how much you'd loose if you forgot about your past
It's funny how friends can just leave you when you're down
It's funny how when you need someone they're never around
It's funny how people can change and think they're so much better
It's funny how many lies can be packed in one ''love letter''
It's funny how people can forgive even though they can't forget
It's funny how one night can contain so much regret
It's funny how ironic life turns out to be,
But the funniest part,
Is that none of it is funny...
To me.
It's funny how good memories can start to make you cry
It's funny how forever never seems to really last
It's funny how much you'd loose if you forgot about your past
It's funny how friends can just leave you when you're down
It's funny how when you need someone they're never around
It's funny how people can change and think they're so much better
It's funny how many lies can be packed in one ''love letter''
It's funny how people can forgive even though they can't forget
It's funny how one night can contain so much regret
It's funny how ironic life turns out to be,
But the funniest part,
Is that none of it is funny...
To me.
Gina Durst
-Rhetorical devices:
+repetition: it’s funny how
+parallelism of the meaning: everything has two sides,
-Message:whatever we want to own is exchanged some others. Let respect
something we have and live happier
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/isn-t-it-funny-3/
ITEM 3: STORY
The Man, the Boy, and
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An Aesop's Fable
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-Rhetorical
devices:
+Metaphor: all
talks of passer-by in the story implies
as the challenging in the life
+Parallelism: each of the talk is equivalent
the act of the man
-Message
: the story implies someome who acts without their particular opinion, easily change their ways whenver others talk to them some other
ways. Through this story, the author want to send us a message that let know
what we are doing, be pleased with what we own, have large background to evaluate everything exactly and live really ourshelves
http://www.taleswithmorals.com/aesop-fable-the-man-the-boy-and-the-donkey.htm
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Hi, Gam. I'd like to give some comments for your first entry.
ReplyDeleteAbout the second item, you don't mention some rhetorical device- rhyme such as
: perfect rhyme: last- past, better- letter, forget- regret......
imperfect rhyme; around-down
in addition, this item also uses the rhetorical question like "isn't it funny ?" to make the tittle more eye -catching .
Commented by : Nguyen Thi Mo
hi,Gam. here are some of my comments:
ReplyDeletei see that the poem has great sentimetal values for us. all things have two sides of a coin. what you think may be very defferent from what you see.something can be changed. those changes can be become so much better or not. it depends on our opinoin, so we shouldn't regret doing something even if it is good or not.
commented by: Bui Thi Loan
Hi Gấm, I have a comment about your 1st item. Honestly, I still dont'e understand the meaning of the message. Could you make it clearer by defining the sentence in the picture and the line "Gun Death" in the mickey's shirt :D? And what kind of person that the mickey stand for?
ReplyDeleteAccording to your source, I found that the message is about the country that could not control the gun. Even though the goverment passed the new laws, it's the fact that the gun culture have no hope for change.
Thanks for reading this. Hope my comment will be useful for you :x
hey Gam: there are my comments fpr your entry:
ReplyDelete1. 1st item: you should analyst more carefully that picture to point out your message persuasively such as the speech of the two men.
2.2nd : i think the title of this poem may be also ạ rhetorical question to make it more attractive .
hope it useful for you next time :X
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