Wednesday, February 6, 2013

ENTRY 1- VU THI GAM




VU THI GAM- ENTRY 1
ITEM 1: CARTOON
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-Rhetorical devices:
+Symbol: a mickey implies as a person
+Metaphor: in America, the use  of a gun is so popular that a small animal also know how to use this kind of weapons
-Message: nowadays, everyone uses gun on public, it cause many bad consequences, it can help someone to protect themselves but also kill people all time. Therefore, it shoud be banned  in the soceity

ITEM 2: POEM
Isn't It Funny?
It's funny how hello is always accompanied with goodbye
It's funny how good memories can start to make you cry

It's funny how forever never seems to really last
It's funny how much you'd loose if you forgot about your past

It's funny how friends can just leave you when you're down
It's funny how when you need someone they're never around

It's funny how people can change and think they're so much better
It's funny how many lies can be packed in one ''love letter''

It's funny how people can forgive even though they can't forget
It's funny how one night can contain so much regret

It's funny how ironic life turns out to be,
But the funniest part,
Is that none of it is funny...
To me. 
Gina Durst
-Rhetorical devices:
+repetition: it’s funny how
+parallelism of the meaning: everything has two sides,
-Message:whatever we  want to own is exchanged some others. Let respect something we have and live happier
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/isn-t-it-funny-3/






ITEM 3: STORY

The Man, the Boy, and
the Donkey
An Aesop's Fable

An Aesop's Fable






A Man and his son were once going with their Donkey to market. As they were walking along by its side a countryman passed them and said: "You fools, what is a Donkey for but to ride upon?"

So the Man put the Boy on the Donkey and they went on their way. But soon they passed a group of men, one of whom said: "See that lazy youngster, he lets his father walk while he rides."

So the Man ordered his Boy to get off, and got on himself. But they hadn't gone far when they passed two women, one of whom said to the other: "Shame on that lazylout to let his poor little son trudge along."

Well, the Man didn't know what to do, but at last he took his Boy up before him on the Donkey. By this time they had come to the town, and the passers-by began to jeer and point at them. The Man stopped and asked what they were scoffing at. The men said:

"Aren't you ashamed of yourself for overloading that poor donkey of yours and your hulking son?"

The Man and Boy got off and tried to think what to do. They thought and they thought, till at last they cut down a pole, tied the donkey's feet to it, and raised the pole and the donkey to their shoulders. They went along amid the laughter of all who met them till they came to Market Bridge, when the Donkey, getting one of his feet loose, kicked out and caused the Boy to drop his end of the pole. In the struggle the Donkey fell over the bridge, and his fore-feet being tied together he was drowned.

"That will teach you," said an old man who had followed them:

Moral of Aesops Fable: Please all, and you will please none
   -Rhetorical devices:
   +Metaphor: all talks of passer-by in the story implies as the challenging in the life
   +Parallelism: each of the talk is equivalent the act of the man

-Message : the story implies someome who acts without their particular opinion, easily change their ways whenver others talk to them some other ways. Through this story, the author want to send us a message that let know what we are doing, be pleased with what we own, have large  background to evaluate everything exactly  and live really ourshelves

http://www.taleswithmorals.com/aesop-fable-the-man-the-boy-and-the-donkey.htm




5 comments:

  1. Hi, Gam. I'd like to give some comments for your first entry.
    About the second item, you don't mention some rhetorical device- rhyme such as
    : perfect rhyme: last- past, better- letter, forget- regret......
    imperfect rhyme; around-down
    in addition, this item also uses the rhetorical question like "isn't it funny ?" to make the tittle more eye -catching .
    Commented by : Nguyen Thi Mo

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  2. hi,Gam. here are some of my comments:
    i see that the poem has great sentimetal values for us. all things have two sides of a coin. what you think may be very defferent from what you see.something can be changed. those changes can be become so much better or not. it depends on our opinoin, so we shouldn't regret doing something even if it is good or not.
    commented by: Bui Thi Loan

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  3. Hi Gấm, I have a comment about your 1st item. Honestly, I still dont'e understand the meaning of the message. Could you make it clearer by defining the sentence in the picture and the line "Gun Death" in the mickey's shirt :D? And what kind of person that the mickey stand for?

    According to your source, I found that the message is about the country that could not control the gun. Even though the goverment passed the new laws, it's the fact that the gun culture have no hope for change.

    Thanks for reading this. Hope my comment will be useful for you :x

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  4. hey Gam: there are my comments fpr your entry:
    1. 1st item: you should analyst more carefully that picture to point out your message persuasively such as the speech of the two men.
    2.2nd : i think the title of this poem may be also ạ rhetorical question to make it more attractive .
    hope it useful for you next time :X

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