Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Entry 1- Hoàng Thị Thùy


Entry 1- Hoàng Thị Thùy


Item 1: Short poem.
Warning !
Jenny Joseph 1932 -

When I am an old woman I shall wear purple
With a red hat which doesn't go, and doesn't suit me,
And I shall spend my pension on brandy and summer gloves
And satin sandals, and say we've no money for butter.
I shall sit down on the pavement when I'm tired
And gobble up samples in shops and press alarm bells
And run my stick along the public railings
And make up for the sobriety of my youth.
I shall go out in my slippers in the rain
And pick the flowers in other people's gardens
And learn to spit.
You can wear terrible shirts and grow more fat
And eat three pounds of sausages at a go
Or only bread and pickle for a week
And hoard pens and pencils and beermats and things in boxes.
But now we must have clothes that keep us dry
And pay our rent and not swear in the street
And set a good example for the children.
We must have friends to dinner and read the papers.
But maybe I ought to practise a little now?
So people who know me are not too shocked and surprised
When suddenly I am old, and start to wear purple.
Rhetorical devices:
-          Repetition: “I shall wear purple” and “start to wear purple”
                “I shall… And”
-          Antithesis:   “ And eat three pounds of sausages at a go
                    Or only bread and pickle for a week “
  
Message: While there are responsibilities and commitments that must be honored, there is time for one to enjoy life and live that way one wishes to.

Item 2: Cartoon




Rhetorical devices:
Irony: two young men are in suits, but stand in cornfield
Message: refer to difficulties to finding jobs after graduating colleges.

Item 3: Short story

The Sun and The Wind


Once The Sun and The Wind happened to have a quarrel. Both of them claimed to be stronger. At last they agreed to have a trial of strength.

"Here comes a traveller. Let us see who can strip him of his cloak?" said the Sun.

The Wind agreed and did choose to have the first turn.

He blew in the hardest possible way.

As a result, the traveller wrapped his cloak even more tightly around him.

Then it was the turn of the Sun. At first he shone very gently. The sun went on shining brighter and brighter. The traveller felt hot.

Before long he took off his cloak and put it in his bag.

The Wind accepted his defeat.
Rhetorical devices:
Metaphor: the Sun with its action ”shone very gently” to the man: persuation
                    The Wind with its action “blew in the hardest possible way”to the man: force
Message: To think about the idea that persuasiveness can be more effective than force.

6 comments:

  1. There are some of my comments for you:
    1. Your materials are quite good but it's lack of source.
    2. For the 1st and 3rd items, I have no comment; but, for the second one, you can see an image of bad field. The field is too dry and all the plants are dying => life is getting hard young people though it contains so much chances.

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  2. for the first item i want to give you a comment. Your entry will be better if you pay attention to the rhyme of the poem.
    We easily find out some Terminal thyme (end- rhyme) in the poem such as purple- gloves- butter.
    Commented by Nguyen Thi Mo

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  3. hi Thuy, i have some comments on your entry
    you collected 3items well
    however,the message of the fisrt item i think is that the life always changes, pp become older, let's live slown down and respect things we get
    it is hard to find the message of the second item, it's too general, i quite agree with the second message
    commented by: Vu Thi Gam

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  4. hi Thuy
    after reading your entry, i like it. however, i have some suggestions for you
    1. the message of item 3 is somehow not clearly. i don't think it is "difficulties", as for me, i think it is current status of student after graduating.
    2. at the third item, i don't agree with you, cause sometimes in some cases, using force can be more effectively. you can say that "persuasiveness is often more effective than force"
    i hope they are useful for you at the next entry
    commented by: Nguyen Thi Thoan

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  5. hi,Thuy, there are my a few comments for your entries;
    1. 1ST item: you should analyst the rhyme of the poem more carefully and rhetorical devices as well as
    2. 2nd item: you should poit out your message because the picture is quite confused to understand easily. it is qite general.
    3. 3rd item: your message you got seemed to unpersuasive and the way you showed rhetorical devices unclearly. you should make it detailed. hope you better next time
    commented by : Le Thi Thu Hien

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